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"The BSRC Checklist": A Proven 4-Step Formula For Writing Irresistible Email Subject Lines

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47% of people open emails based only on the subject line (Optinmonster)

Yet most content creators spend less than 20 seconds writing theirs.

The result: 

Their emails get ignored. 

They don’t get read, don’t earn money, and sadly — were never worth writing.

The good news? 

There’s a 4-step checklist for writing irresistible subject lines


One that played a huge role in taking The Pen Pivot’s open rate from 39% to 52%.

The “BSRC Checklist” helps you write subject lines that:

  • Get noticed.

  • Build trust.

  • Skyrocket open rates.

You’re about to learn:

  • The 4 pillars of the BSRC checklist.

  • How to use it to increase your own email open rate.

  • A ChatGPT prompt to generate BSRC subject lines for your emails in 3 seconds.

Let’s get to it.

What Is The BSRC Checklist?

It stands for:

  1. Benefit: What’s in it for the reader?

  2. Specificity: How clear and detailed is the subject line?

  3. Relevance: Does it match your audience’s interests?

  4. Curiosity: Does it spark intrigue without being misleading?

Together, these elements make any email subject line irresistible. 

They balance clarity with curiosity — making your email feel worth opening.

Why The BSRC Checklist Works So Well

It taps into key psychological triggers:

  • Benefit: Appeals to the reader’s self-interest.

  • Specificity: Builds trust and sets clear expectations.

  • Relevance: Makes the email feel personal and timely.

  • Curiosity: Encourages clicking by leaving just enough mystery.

Mistakes To Avoid:

  • Misleading subject lines: Don’t promise what the email doesn’t deliver — it damages trust.

  • Vague statements: Unclear subject lines will always feel like clickbait and increase the risk of spam reports.

Let’s go through each step of the checklist in more detail (with examples).

By the end, you’ll be able to use it to get any email opened — simply by writing ‘magnetic’ subject lines that stand out and demand clicks.

More clicks = more email opens = more email revenue.

You’ll also get a ChatGPT prompt to generate these irresistible, ‘BSRC-ready’ subject lines for your emails in seconds.

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