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"The BSRC Checklist": A Proven 4-Step Formula For Writing Irresistible Email Subject Lines
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47% of people open emails based only on the subject line (Optinmonster).
Yet most content creators spend less than 20 seconds writing theirs.
The result:
Their emails get ignored.
They donât get read, donât earn money, and sadly â were never worth writing.
The good news?
Thereâs a 4-step checklist for writing irresistible subject linesâŠ
One that played a huge role in taking The Pen Pivotâs open rate from 39% to 52%.
The âBSRC Checklistâ helps you write subject lines that:
Get noticed.
Build trust.
Skyrocket open rates.
Youâre about to learn:
The 4 pillars of the BSRC checklist.
How to use it to increase your own email open rate.
A ChatGPT prompt to generate BSRC subject lines for your emails in 3 seconds.
Letâs get to it.
What Is The BSRC Checklist?
It stands for:
Benefit: Whatâs in it for the reader?
Specificity: How clear and detailed is the subject line?
Relevance: Does it match your audienceâs interests?
Curiosity: Does it spark intrigue without being misleading?
Together, these elements make any email subject line irresistible.
They balance clarity with curiosity â making your email feel worth opening.
Why The BSRC Checklist Works So Well
It taps into key psychological triggers:
Benefit: Appeals to the readerâs self-interest.
Specificity: Builds trust and sets clear expectations.
Relevance: Makes the email feel personal and timely.
Curiosity: Encourages clicking by leaving just enough mystery.
Mistakes To Avoid:
Misleading subject lines: Donât promise what the email doesnât deliver â it damages trust.
Vague statements: Unclear subject lines will always feel like clickbait and increase the risk of spam reports.
Letâs go through each step of the checklist in more detail (with examples).
By the end, youâll be able to use it to get any email opened â simply by writing âmagneticâ subject lines that stand out and demand clicks.
More clicks = more email opens = more email revenue.
Youâll also get a ChatGPT prompt to generate these irresistible, âBSRC-readyâ subject lines for your emails in seconds.
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